neverleave: (why are you even here)
Natsuno "scrappy emo kid" Yuuki/Koide ([personal profile] neverleave) wrote in [community profile] come_sailaway 2022-09-02 05:07 pm (UTC)

[He scoots a little to break the physical contact, but otherwise lets Pollux read over his shoulder: Cain is weeping at Abel's funeral, even though he's the one who killed him. He tries to understand why he did it - jealousy? revenge? - but can't find an answer. All he knows is that without his little brother, he can no longer be a part of society.]

I get the emotions, but - [He frowns, trying to think about how to put it without outright saying he doesn't get what this story has to do with the vampires that destroyed his village.] it reads like I'm supposed the sympathize with this guy.

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